So Good

A comfortable sound; is found in the pews Illuminated, we are feeling the Good News As this providence is caught alive All tempestuous thoughts of transgressors subside Hallelujah, HE brings divine will for all of us too… It is so good to hear the sweet sounds from the pews

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Heidie Buys

Date: 9/9/2008 2:42:00 PM

So very uplifting and spiritually divine. Well written and simply love the last line. Well done. Love Heidie

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/9/2008 1:37:00 PM

Adell this is lovely. I like the rhyming sequence and the message. I really listened to a great one this past Sunday. It was uplifting. Great job & God bless always! ~Joseph

James Foulk

Date: 9/9/2008 1:15:00 PM

really enjoyed this one Adell a great write. thank you for reading my chicken feathers and for your comment. your right, i should have said goose feathers, you can use chicken feathers but i hear they really smell. another thing about this poem it does remind me of all the empty pews our church has each week. and last sunday across the street from where i live they were playing softball and the parking lot was full, a sad thing.

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/9/2008 10:39:00 AM

Adell - Praise God it certainly is - You know when I first started back to Church I was very apprehensive to say the least - Though it was like returning home from a long journey - I love you and I love your poetry - God Bless