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So Glad They Are Back

Unusual day There’s a strange scent in the wind, Unfamiliar scent. I feel eyes on me. Carefully hidden from view, I glance at my land. Something is different. A unique smell, a snapped twig. I grow gypsy ears. Survey horizon, Slowly and methodically. I am being watched. The ground is barren. Cold, stiff, and frozen. So February. Tiny glints of light Leads eager eyes to the south. I know it’s an elf. It’s not the first time. In summer I had faeries. Dancing with delight. A relieved smile. I am happy, all-knowing. So glad they are back!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/6/2018 12:41:00 PM
This is a great poem and I had to read twice and get my imagination working. Once working had all sorts of images and also a sense of joy and mischief. So good your poem raised these feelings, thankyou.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2018 3:21:00 AM
Thank you, Stewart. Your comment has delighted me as subtlety is exactly what I had been striving.
Date: 2/15/2018 2:45:00 PM
Right up my alley, Carmen. A definite FAVE for me.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2018 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Line. I knew it would be after getting to know you.
Date: 2/14/2018 6:03:00 PM
Nice write, seen and read.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2018 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Ronald. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/14/2018 4:19:00 PM
These enchanted creatures are all around us but can only be seen with eyes that believe and hearts that feel...You expressed it well in your poem...All the best Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2018 3:23:00 AM
Thank you, My Friend. Enchanted is the word I always think of but forget to use. I'm going to try and use it today. I like learning from experts.

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