So Furthered In Life

I admire the wrinkles upon your face
They are beautiful to see
They're folds, lines and creases
And you wear them courageously.

You awarded some to the most
And most to those with less
For these that you have handed
Your face has so been blessed.

The birth of these markings
Are born from blessings with a kiss
Thus your life has been so furthered
To exhibit heavenly bliss.

Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 3, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Great work, a face that tells a story is wrinkled and worn but is warm and understanding to those who share your life. Cheers Kev
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