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So Far

So far I've gone, too far I've been, to see you as you were. A lonely heart, a loving care. So many places I have seen, and suddenly apart. Again you're close and in my dreams, whished we would never part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/24/2010 7:14:00 PM
sweet little part. Now that I am all caught up on page one, I discovered that I had seen many on page two as well! What country is that desert you told me of? Probably I should know! Luv, andrea
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Date: 9/21/2009 9:35:00 AM
thanks for sharing your poems with us .... It is tough being away from the ones you love.....nice write!
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:41:00 AM
I like the last three lines especially. I can feel the emotion here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:39:00 AM
Beautifully poised. Thx for your comment on my poem.
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:38:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Gert. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hope you are doing well and had a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 12:55:00 PM
The yearning is felt, nice write Gert...Raul
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:02:00 AM
There is a sense of longing that touches my heart in this poem, Gert. I hope your wishes come true. It's hard to live with only "dreams" to carry you through the day. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn
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