Gert W. Knop Poet Rhyme

So Far

So far I've gone,
too far I've been,
to see you as you were.
A lonely heart,
a loving care.
So many places I have seen,
and suddenly apart.
Again you're close
and in my dreams,
whished we would never part.

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Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2010 at 7:14 PM sweet little part. Now that I am all caught up on page one, I discovered that I had seen many on page two as well! What country is that desert you told me of? Probably I should know! Luv, andrea

Abe Lopez September 21, 2009 at 9:35 AM thanks for sharing your poems with us .... It is tough being away from the ones you love.....nice write!

Sara Kendrick September 21, 2009 at 7:41 AM I like the last three lines especially. I can feel the emotion here. Keep writing. Sara

Nadia Shahwan September 21, 2009 at 7:39 AM Beautifully poised. Thx for your comment on my poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2009 at 4:38 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Gert. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hope you are doing well and had a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno September 20, 2009 at 12:55 PM The yearning is felt, nice write Gert...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire September 20, 2009 at 7:02 AM There is a sense of longing that touches my heart in this poem, Gert. I hope your wishes come true. It's hard to live with only "dreams" to carry you through the day. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn