So Far

So far I've gone,
too far I've been,
to see you in my dreams.
A lonely heart,
a loving care,
So many places I have seen,
and suddenly apart.
Again you're close
and in my dreams,
whish we will never part.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 9:47 AM
Nice one, GErt. So funny about your name. So even in Germany it is not recognized as male? We have many names in america that can go "both ways!' Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Gert,it is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Nice Rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
Arteaga Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 2:11 PM
dreams seem to fill our emptiness but does not clean out the feeling of void, nice poem, keep wishing!
Devonshire Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 2:02 PM
The lonely heart searches for companionship, even in dreams. Hopefully, you will find your love again and "never part." Nice work, Gert! Love, Carolyn
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