So Cut Up (Dead At the Seems)

shut it up, i dont want to die here
close the door, im too araid of you
go away, im so afraid to cry here
give up hope, there nothing you can do.

so cut up, im dead as we know it.
so cut up, im dead at the seams.
i believe im gone for the moment
i believe, ive ruined your dreams.

shut it up, just speak in a whisper
close the door, im done with the lies
go away, i can't take the disaster
give up hope, its your only disguse

so cut up, believe what you want to 
so cut up, beieve what you see
i believe, ive ruined your future
i believe, ive ruined your dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 7, 2016 at 8:29 AM
C D ,,,, THIS IS GOOD POEM...SKAT
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May 2, 2016 at 10:56 AM
catia davis, well done...LINDA
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May 12, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Cat, are these your poems?
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July 31, 2009 at 8:19 AM
excellent exposure of extreme pain and anger..the meter was great..the lack of gramatic punctuation seemed ;) to FIT the content! Loved the title TOO! Please help me out by entering a verse on "War what is it good for" contest! Light & Love
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