So Confused

confusion,delusion
thoughts that aren;t real
the things that i see
the way that i feel
not sure what is there 
don't know what is real
believing more each day
that i got a raw deal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 3, 2016 at 12:34 AM
DANNY, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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September 6, 2009 at 3:51 AM
Nicely written. Sara
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February 11, 2009 at 3:18 AM
a raw deal! but your poem ain't raw, sir! good one! ~ Arany
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February 10, 2009 at 9:55 PM
nicely done. . . .
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