So Alone

No one to call my own So alone Not even one to phone So alone None to see how I've grown So alone My past literally seems blown So alone But my future still unknown So alone...…..So alone Moan!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/20/2018 2:15:00 PM

Jay I have just read this poem. I see myselfas I read your poem. have a nice day my friend.

Jay Moore
Date: 11/20/2018 4:41:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, No that's not me

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/30/2018 3:30:00 PM

Hello Jay, just read your poem, question: are you a widower? Why do you feel alone? Or is this just a poem? Nice to meet you. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2018 5:26:00 PM

Okay then someone else. thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2018 2:12:00 PM

Hello Jay,well ther is a chance that you and your wife will get back together. Never say never.I have a question: Did you give me your e-mail address? I have bja2mgnter@gmail.com Is that you? Let me know. Thank you. Because i do not know who it is ,is why i am asking.

Jay Moore
Date: 10/30/2018 3:34:00 PM

No just separated for now, then? Only the shadow knows. Nice to meet you and thanks

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/27/2018 4:05:00 PM

The first step, my friend, is to reach out, and I know you can do this, so keep the faith!

Jay Moore
Date: 10/28/2018 5:57:00 PM

One step forward and three back. Ok got it. Thanks Caren

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/27/2018 12:33:00 PM

Hello Jay...I see you've been writing in characteristic lighthearted fashion. I hope the week-end finds you blessed. I really enjoy your poems. In loss, left living, with a broken heart. Alas, I know too well,..love left in gardens of stone. -Richard

Jay Moore
Date: 10/28/2018 5:53:00 PM

Don't we all brother. Thanks