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Snuggled in Sunshine

lost in gold glamour
hammock trees whisper green breeze
lotus color sprees

a warm noon warning
of soon tangerine caress
dragonfly's address

swinging sage summer
June beauties in lemon squeeze
saffron memories
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:36 PM
Pretty one, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Love your Haiku write/picture. Wish I was on your pretty beach. Let's run away... Have a great day.............
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:25 PM
A vacation sounds marvelous, Paula! Thank you for your appreciation. I hope your weekend is nice. :)
Bowring Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Such beautiful haiku’s dear Evelyn. Your glorious, vivid words transport the reader to a tropical paradise. I love the imagery here- divine! The use of colour by your talented pen is heavenly as you create a place of tranquility and wonder. Just what is needed on a dark, winter’s day. Loved it! Thank you for sharing dear friend. Hugs and smiles xx
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:33 PM
Dear Christina, thank you very much for your precious remarks. Your enjoyment of this poem is heartwarming. Hugs and blessings. <3
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Your poem evokes delight, Evelyn; --whisper green breeze --tangerine caress-- saffron memories... so well written, my friend.
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:27 PM
Thank you very much for your kind, thoughtful comment, Vijay.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 3:16 AM
Stupendous alliteration and a lovely colorful poem.
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your comment. Blessings. :)
Greenhough Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 8:58 PM
We're all waiting for the sunshine. These Haikus are magnificent. Best wishes, Evelyn. Thumbs up on your skills.
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:18 PM
Yes, winter does seem so long. Thank you very much for the compliment and good wishes. Have a wonderful week. :)
Sharma  Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Oh my, dear Evelyn this poem feels like a soft summery serenade with refreshing ambience of lemonade fragrances and tangerine ambience.. Ahh, it's adorable to read these words, during winter and feel the zephyr of sunny rays.. This really brought me so much warmth and peace to read, especially as I believe that I'm a spring child, haha.."lotus color sprees","swinging sage summer","saffron memories" Beautifully crafted, as always.."gold glamor" Love this! Sending best wishes and light your way :)
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:13 PM
I thank you from my heart, for your warm words of appreciation, good will and cheer, dear friend. I was actually born on March 18th-just before spring. :) I loved reading your kind, memorable words. Many blessings.
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