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Snowy Blue Mountain

snowy blue mountain
double beauty double good...
icy frozen heart

snow on the mountain
fire in hearth a certainty...
slow ignited fire

Thanks for the challenge
P.D..
Contest Entry by:
Sara Kendrick

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2012 5:38:00 AM

congrats Sara on a wonderful win for this visual delight poem .. for sdharing this lovely view..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2012 12:49:00 AM

I remember from before really liking this. Congrats on your win, SAra.

Tim B

Date: 7/12/2012 3:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win, though it is dissimilar in ways, it rings of Frost's "Fire and Ice" capturing in similarity the elements of the.... elements. :) Great poem, thanks for sharing Mrs. Sara.

Marty Owens

Date: 7/12/2012 9:56:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed...Hope you're doing good..Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2012 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 7/12/2012 7:21:00 AM

Sara congrats on your win...I like this set..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2012 7:51:00 PM

Sara, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/10/2012 1:07:00 PM

Nice frosty verse! Made me feel cooler on this hot summer day. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/9/2012 8:06:00 PM

Hot and cold beautifully conjoined! Well done, Sara!! Best wishes, Keith

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2012 7:34:00 PM

It was a great challenge, wasn't it? I sure remember that icy mountain you describe here. I also used the word icy to describe it! Love that second haiku's message.

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/7/2012 8:01:00 PM

Great art. Enjoyed this Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/7/2012 12:38:00 PM

Wow, Sara, you have truly written a magnificent write here! I love the line, "icy frozen heart" that says a lot about this mountain my friend! What an awesome poem, lovely in every sense! Great work!!