Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Snowy Blue Mountain

snowy blue mountain
double beauty double good...
icy frozen heart

snow on the mountain
fire in hearth a certainty...
slow ignited fire

Thanks for the challenge
P.D..
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Sara Kendrick

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2012 at 5:38 AM congrats Sara on a wonderful win for this visual delight poem .. for sdharing this lovely view..

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2012 at 12:49 AM I remember from before really liking this. Congrats on your win, SAra.

Tim B July 12, 2012 at 3:10 PM Congrats on your win, though it is dissimilar in ways, it rings of Frost's "Fire and Ice" capturing in similarity the elements of the.... elements. :) Great poem, thanks for sharing Mrs. Sara.

Marty Owens July 12, 2012 at 9:56 AM Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed...Hope you're doing good..Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2012 at 7:22 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams July 12, 2012 at 7:21 AM Sara congrats on your win...I like this set..David

Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2012 at 7:51 PM Sara, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD

Matthew Anish July 10, 2012 at 1:07 PM Nice frosty verse! Made me feel cooler on this hot summer day. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Keith Bickerstaffe July 9, 2012 at 8:06 PM Hot and cold beautifully conjoined! Well done, Sara!! Best wishes, Keith

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2012 at 7:34 PM It was a great challenge, wasn't it? I sure remember that icy mountain you describe here. I also used the word icy to describe it! Love that second haiku's message.

Sherese Gooden July 7, 2012 at 8:01 PM Great art. Enjoyed this Sara.

Russell Sivey July 7, 2012 at 12:38 PM Wow, Sara, you have truly written a magnificent write here! I love the line, "icy frozen heart" that says a lot about this mountain my friend! What an awesome poem, lovely in every sense! Great work!!

Jonas L. Rozario July 7, 2012 at 12:34 PM Very nice Sara...best of luck in the contest.

Kash Poet July 7, 2012 at 12:18 PM Beautiful imagery in this haiku Sara.I think you have written on that blue mountain photo.PD is going to like it.Best wishes to you.

Debra Squyres July 7, 2012 at 10:00 AM I love this....very well done!! Best of luck in the contest !!