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Snowglobes

Loving And just being Passengers in a world of snow Our unique story continues to grow A sanctuary built completely on total trust My love for you felt well beyond carnal lust Building with you a world full of brilliant devotion Something I once thought was an impossible notion But in your eyes, there can be no way of denying I see a lifetime of possibilities without even trying As I'm kissing you on your brow and lobe The whole time we are in, our snowglobe Your hands in mine I hold Warming from cold Placed on a shelf Giving all of myself Time well spent in this happy space Let's go have brunch while I adore your face

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Date: 2/27/2023 10:44:00 AM
This was so well-thought! And the shapening of this poem made it even better!! Interesting concept!!
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much my first try at setting the words to form an image it is simple but also beautiful in how it turned out. I just wish it would have looked more like a snow-globe then a tree LOL. Really appreciate the visits today!! Regards A.S.
Date: 2/26/2023 11:45:00 AM
Great poem and very well-crafted, AS, Your thought is well expressed as well. I enjoy reading and the tree shape
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Date: 2/26/2023 11:56:00 AM
As always your Sage wisdom is definitely appreciated! My first attempt at doing any type of shaped piece as far as how the words are laid out by margin. I was actually trying to recreate a snow globe but I can definitely see the tree that you do LOL. Best regards A.S.

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