Snowflakes On the Day

Smoke curls from the chimneys,
And dissolves into the grey
Then the clouds in exchange
Release snowflakes on the day

Soon the air is full of white flakes
Filtering the sounds of life away
The land is soon under deep snow
Of snowflakes released on the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Curtis Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 1:24 AM
Thanks Carol
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December 8, 2010 at 7:01 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Paul. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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