Snowflakes and Embers

Snowflakes fall from Heaven's open door
 white stars of night glow on the shadowed floor,
beneath a pale moon slipping 'tween skulking clouds
 floating listless blown by soft, silent winds to shrouds
down on to earth touching the hardened ground
 piling one upon another without a sound.

The New Year celebrations just about to begin
  gather wood for the fire pit's crackling thru the din
stoking the leaves and branches there laid
  warming the gatherers for the year end display
chilled yet braving the bone chiling cold
  the embers glow burnt red eyes in the snow.

For a moment hanging on the clock
 the snow and embers blend together in the rocks
and sizzled steamings rise as smoky specters of the night
 leering in the hollows, calling winsome shrills on their flight
to warm and chill in the same time that ticks away
 fading seconds welcoming the new year's day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Neumann Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 9:45 AM
This is beautiful. Congratulations. XXX Kai
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Charming win. Congrats, DM.
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:04 PM
An incredibly beautiful write DM. Excellent content illuminated by your enchanting and brilliant imagery and rhymes. An enthralling poem. Congratulations for your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
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December 27, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Now this is an awesome write..
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