Snowflakes

Tumultuous yet tranquil—
Your tiny tufts are blown

Upon your endless sea of white,
And seem to softly float,

Not ever taking time of day
To pause their dizzy winter dance,

Until their feet are made to melt
Within my open hands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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M V Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 9:48 AM
What a beautiful scene you have painted,Nick.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 5:30 PM
I kept picturing a toupee flying in this blustery wind we have lately....LOL
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Nice creative and expressive write on Snowflakes, Nick
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