Snowflakes

Floating lazily,
The snowflakes gently ease my
Heart to prayerful rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:03 AM
lovely haiku, congrats on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Good one..Congratulations.Sara
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:33 AM
I love your last line Benjamin! Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-)
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations Benjamin, on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in skat's contest.Benjamin
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Nice settling prayer, I could drink tea and read it instead of watching snow fall, lovely, congrats on your win:)
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Benjamin) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Big congratulations on your win Benjamin in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:58 PM
What a sweet tranquil haiku. Congratulations, Benjamin.
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Benjamin, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Congrats Benjamin on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write luv.. enjoy tonight with luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Very meaningful haiku with good images. Benjamin
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Wonderful words for the contest entry Benjamin.. good luck with this happy Haiku luv..
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