Snowflakes

snowflakes fly
lost on the updrift
sunlight sparkles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adelana Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 11:40 AM
wonderful uplifting view on snowflakes, keep it flowing. I responded to the question you asked on my blog "IF MEN WERE GOD", i hope I broaden your view...
Eggins Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 8:07 AM
this is just beautiful well done Jayne
Shango Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Another jewel from your pen
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December 1, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Such an uplifting view. Nice use of alliteration. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:30 PM
I love to see snow flakes, we don't get snow too much in Georgia.
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