Snowflakes

There are two similar snowflakes,
they`re dancing in the frosty air.
And childish joy them merry makes
in such a menacing and hostile era. 

Persecuted flocks the wind severe 
then will sweep impassively aside.
On the sly those naughty disappear, 
rest will come soon in the clear sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 3:10 AM
Great expressive and descriptive language..I especially like the first two lines..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Palli Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:37 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
Al-Riyami Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 2:57 PM
GLAD U DDNT GO OLEG!
Goff Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 7:38 PM
much fun! Oleg! we get a bunch of snow here in Minnesota! too!...jim
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