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Snowflakes

Falling, falling, forever falling.
We know of nothing else.  
Our lives are formed by attraction.  
Something draws us closer 
It is a pull we feel.
The grounded feel it also 
growing in them all their lives 
until they stop 
to be a part of some much larger 
heartbeat than their own. 
We do not mind this quiet life at times
watching our brothers and sisters 
falling by our side.
We were all born to fall. 
We come from the same Father 
falling jointly to those who have gone before.
We will rest inside each others’ memory. 
Side by side alike in our falling 
but different in so many ways.
No two of us alike.
A lifetime given to us all  
however great, however small
until we land.
Some will land in the night  
some will go to the light
the luckiest of all 
are those who fall 
to a child’s out-stretched tongue,
what better way 
for snowflakes to be done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Those who are blessed with age are also cursed with loss. I do like the part of joining with a larger heartbeat. The ultimate reunion. It removes some of the sting.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:32 PM
No better way at all!
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