Snowflake Thunder Haiku

Snowflake Thunder Haiku

snowflake thunder booms
shaking ice crystals from trees
shimmering light falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 4:59 PM
excellent Haiku, Danny. Although short, it was a compelling read....I especially liked the ending line.
Derden Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 6:51 PM
Thank you.
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:47 AM
VERY good. I know that weather event, I've seen it, it's a great one to write about. Really like 3rd line. (you know what, when I read 'shimmering lights', I pictured lights decorating people's homes for Xmas but as I was leaving this box, I thought that might not be what you meant. YET the image worked really well for me. I guess that would be lights fall.)
Derden Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Thank you.
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