Snowfall

the first snowfall creaks under my feet like a starch - jelly november 07.11.2019 A Late Fall Or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:46:00 AM

Fun poem, Kurt. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2019 1:39:00 AM

I find the final line intriguing! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 5:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Kurt :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 8:27:00 PM

Very interesting haiku, Kurt. Also, very well done! Congrats o your win! Charlie

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 8:06:00 PM

Kurt, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku, thanks for participating!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2019 8:02:00 PM

very interesting imagery, Kurt. I enjoyed this a lot . Congrats in the contest

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2019 7:46:00 AM

I’m picturing a jelly donut...