Kurt Ravidas Poet Haiku

Snowfall

the first snowfall creaks 
under my feet like a starch - 
jelly november

07.11.2019
A Late Fall Or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5

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Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 6:46 AM Fun poem, Kurt. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison November 9, 2019 at 1:39 AM I find the final line intriguing! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2019 at 5:08 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kurt :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina November 7, 2019 at 8:27 PM Very interesting haiku, Kurt. Also, very well done! Congrats o your win! Charlie

Tania Kitchin November 7, 2019 at 8:06 PM Kurt, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku, thanks for participating!

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2019 at 8:02 PM very interesting imagery, Kurt. I enjoyed this a lot . Congrats in the contest

Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 7:46 AM I’m picturing a jelly donut...