Notes About The Poem

Snowed As We Slept

as we slept in
the dead of the
night, snow piled up
on the cold ground.

we woke up at
dawn to a white
cold rug of snow
to have fun on.

drips of wet froze
and hung from roof
tile as we feel
the nip of cold.

snow spades are dug
out of the shed
to clear the path,
we feel the cold.

soft snow does call.
with coats on we
go for a thrill
on the new sled

play time is done!
time to go in
to a warm fire,
and a hot drink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 1:46 AM
Snow time lovely described:)
Rose  Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Such beautiful memories Eve, and the photo is such a great memory of the days gone by, Thank you for sharing, hope you are keeping well, love and light,Vie
Burchett Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Well written! I felt the cold. Max
One Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:45 AM
So many have done this and you captured it so well... great poem Eve.
M  Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 9:25 PM
Sounds delightful Eve….l will have a hot chocolate please! Debx
Meadows Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:47 AM
Sounds like you had fun! A nice poem. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 2:49 AM
- A fun day for the children, Eve ... (I hope it will be a long time until the snow comes :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:33 AM
what a charming winter scene you paint with your words, thanks for sharing Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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