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Snowed As We Slept

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as we slept in the dead of the night, snow piled up on the cold ground. we woke up at dawn to a white cold rug of snow to have fun on. drips of wet froze and hung from roof tile as we feel the nip of cold. snow spades are dug out of the shed to clear the path, we feel the cold. soft snow does call. with coats on we go for a thrill on the new sled play time is done! time to go in to a warm fire, and a hot drink.

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Date: 9/14/2023 1:46:00 AM
Snow time lovely described:)
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:19:00 AM
Such beautiful memories Eve, and the photo is such a great memory of the days gone by, Thank you for sharing, hope you are keeping well, love and light,Vie
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Date: 9/3/2023 6:23:00 PM
Well written! I felt the cold. Max
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:45:00 AM
So many have done this and you captured it so well... great poem Eve.
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Date: 9/1/2023 9:25:00 PM
Sounds delightful Eve….l will have a hot chocolate please! Debx
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Date: 9/1/2023 3:47:00 AM
Sounds like you had fun! A nice poem. Well done.
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Date: 9/1/2023 2:49:00 AM
- A fun day for the children, Eve ... (I hope it will be a long time until the snow comes :) - hugs
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Date: 9/1/2023 1:33:00 AM
what a charming winter scene you paint with your words, thanks for sharing Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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