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Snowed

At a distance, snow
clumped beneath a pine tree 
plastic Walmart bag


1/31/13

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/22/2013 10:15:00 AM

A haiku to make you think about the effects, mankind has done to the earth. Nicely penned and I hope you did well in the contest!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/18/2013 9:48:00 PM

very good one, an environmentally satire work, Susan. :) CONGRATSS

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2013 9:18:00 PM

Many congrats on this fine win dear Susan

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/28/2013 3:10:00 PM

Congrats, Susan. Excellent write. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/28/2013 12:43:00 PM

A very powerful Haiku. Walmarts bags are certainly found on the grounds. Congrats. Connie

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/28/2013 12:43:00 AM

nice haiku friend Susan. Congratulations on your win :) Cheers!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/27/2013 10:05:00 PM

Susan,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 10:55:00 PM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 3:14:00 PM

Hola, Susan how are you?? Are you packing your bags yet?? Ready for a Texas adventure... LOL...JK... anyways, I'm stopping by to say hi AGAIN. and read your latest. and about your haiku..I thought the image only happens in Texas. all the trees and flowers wear white plastic bags to cover their beauty.. Sadly they die from the suffocation and dumb weather down here. I love this one.. i can go on and on about this. I can even send you pictures of the image above :-( luv~ PD