Snowdrops

You blossom too soon dear snowdrops of spring
Secluded in the cold dark earth;
The white flakes that fly still haunt the sky
Too weary with sorrow to salute your birth.
One warm day awakened you from sleep
And sang with springtime’s soft breath;
Caressed your eyes with the lips of spring
And you awakened to winter in the arms of death.
Where is the due she pledged to you
The passion of sun and song of the breeze;
The frilled hyacinth with heavy perfume
And the robin’s merry note in the trees?

Birds are yet hushed and the branch is yet bare
The snowflakes fall on the crest of the hill;
Your sodden petals lie pressed on the ground
Without warmth when winter kept his chill.
The snowflakes conceal the spot where you lie
Living too soon in a winter's cold noon
They are covered with snow so no one will know
The grave of the snowdrops that flowered too soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 11:15 PM
Love this of yours, Elizabeth from 2011, a favourite then and now...Hope you visit at some time, and hope you are well..Stay Safe...Harry
Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 10:22 PM
awsome poem...you are very gifted.
Duncan Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 8:21 PM
Awesome,,,, what else can I say ;}
Horne Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 10:35 AM
this is just awesome, Elizabeth. The last line is so clever
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Dear Elizabeth... as another reviewer noted, there is much melancholy in this piece. However, you are that rare poet who can blend beauty with melancholy seamlessly and effortlessly, and create work that has so much more depth and commitment. This is extraordinary...
Ball Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:06 PM
This is so beautiful Liz. You do know how to turn a phrase. Every word in every line so beautifully penned and well thought out. Wonderful imagery and emotion. Excellent. God Bless, JB
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 11:55 PM
Dear Liz, To be able to write a poem with such beauty you must have an artist's eye and a poet's heart. I love the compassion you convey for the lovely snowdrops. You become the flower and their voice and I am enchanted by the depth of your talent, not to mention extremely impressed! This lovely keepsake is going into my favorites.
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December 9, 2011 at 9:09 PM
wow! your images here are simply... captivating Dinda. i can feel the snowdrops falling. thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.
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December 9, 2011 at 9:11 PM
oopps. so sorry Elizabeth, i'm opening multiple pages so got mixed up. but the comment is for this poem.. so sorry. wish we can edit our comments ~.~
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 5:59 PM
They are a beautiful flower..I have always called the ones that I have Lily Of The Valley..I have no idea where I got that name..Maybe what I have just looks similar and is not the same plant..Enjoyed reading your work..I think that I will see if I can find some to plant..Your presences at my work is always uplifting.Sara
Devnath  Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 8:41 AM
My friend, I am freezing with your snowdrops that not a single way you left to describe it. Very nice description with all sequences. Thanks for sharing. bl
Minardi Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Beautiful, Elizabeth. I love the last 4 lines. Have a great weekend dear :)
Effendi Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Whats with Melancholy Writes, Liz??? Can I do something to cheer you up? Awesome piece by the way.
Song Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 2:26 AM
A baren winter lies in wait for these spectacular signs of spring. Love the variant white ones the most...I think there are 75 different varieties of these lil gals..they look like they have petticoats on. Then there is the rare blue on that'll see. All these are my fav signs of early spring. Thanks for this soothing poem. Gwendolen
Babcock Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful poem on snow and we do have a lot of that at the moment. It has been melting the last few days. Yes, it is nice to have a few fellow Canadians on the soup. love phyl
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November 23, 2011 at 6:25 PM
A moving and very sad piece of poetry Elizabeth. I could feel a broken heart from this poem and I could also feel your grievance. Keep on writing, you have so many skills in expressing heartfelt sentiments. Million thx for sharing And May God Bless!
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 6:08 PM
so beautiful, Elizabeth! Masterful poem.
Treetop Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 4:32 PM
I do so enjoy your beautiful poetry. XLT
Horne Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 2:17 PM
I love this piece. What a wonderful idea, the snow making a grave for the snowdrops. Awesome, my friend
B Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 11:56 AM
The line 'the passion of sun and song of the breeze;' is quite charming. The whole poem is true to form excellent as always Elizabeth. My mind takes me many different directions with its meaning and I have yet to rest on one of my own. Well done.
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Elizabeth. Will be back another day to read more. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Winter and spring, it soon will bring a miriad of seasonal bliss. And you will again remark with your pen. Another one lovely as this.
Horsman Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:01 AM
this is truly amazing elizabeth, you are so creative, got to go to my favourite's along with the poet.
Yakubu Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Here comes the winter ''am too weary to salute your birth'' gifted Elizabeth, you did not only know how to write but also know how to coment to lift ones spirit. You are great. Mathy
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November 23, 2011 at 7:17 AM
* "Happy Holidays * My Dear Sweet Precious Elizabeth * Amongst Some Things I Count Your Gifted, Priceless & Lovely Beauty As Something To Be Thankful For In Having Been Blessed To Cross Poetic Paths With, My Dear * Rarely Tis There A Jewel As Bright Amid Glittering As Your Shimmering Beauty * In Sincere Regards Unto This Stirring Within Magnificence Verse * I Always Do My Best To Escape This Moment We Live * Ever Gazing Forward Unto The Joyous Promise & Views of A Glorious Tomorrow * Take My Hand & Let Us Walk Unto The Shores Tranquillities Neverending * Beauty & Love * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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November 23, 2011 at 7:14 AM
you have such an interesting perspective and it's an entertaining affair to read your poetry. This one is riddled with finely tuned personification and imagery that appeals to varied emotions. Wonderful Elizabeth and btw... I enjoy your comments and am honored when I read them. (where is votre livre?)
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