Kim Rodrigues Poet Quintain (English)

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Snowball Slew

SNOWBALL SLEW

avalanche snow ~ true breathless blue
he slips, she slides, he dives, she flips
the helpless team - a snowball slew
of heads and knees, of toes and lips
and she yells cut ~ redo the scripts

7/25/2017
English Quintain

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Vijay Pandit August 12, 2017 at 10:15 AM Congrats Kim on your win!! Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2017 at 11:01 AM Thanks, Vijay!

Eve Roper August 2, 2017 at 3:03 PM Kim,hahaha... l-o-v-e your poem :) , congratulations on your win very well deserved ~* Kim Rodrigues August 2, 2017 at 4:04 PM Thanks so much, Eve!

Agnes Krampe August 2, 2017 at 9:47 AM Congrats on your win with this fun poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues August 2, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thanks, Agnes!

Joseph May August 2, 2017 at 7:19 AM A lovely write Kim...Congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues August 2, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thanks, Joseph!

Janice Canerdy August 2, 2017 at 12:40 AM Kim, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice Kim Rodrigues August 2, 2017 at 5:35 AM Thank you so much, Janice :)

Dean Wood July 27, 2017 at 11:43 AM Sounds like my wife doing a home video of a snowball fight. A very nice quintain Kim. I am getting better at these. This is great. - Dean Kim Rodrigues July 27, 2017 at 2:55 PM Thanks, Dean!

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2017 at 3:18 PM What a clever idea. is it for the contest of Sara? Great imagery, Kim Kim Rodrigues July 26, 2017 at 3:42 PM Thank you Andrea! This one is for Janice's contest.