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Snowball Bush Beckoning

snowball bush full bloom
heart of enchantment dusk fumes
as butterflies flit

green lawn of languor
and beauties lying in beds
in the mellow noon

white moon and scent orbs
attracting hued birds and bees
stopping hearts and feet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Leiser Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 9:23 PM
Love reading your many poems of flowers, birds and bees, Evelyn! Your lovely imagery is enchanting! Love hydrangeas and these fine haikus…a fave! :)
Buehler Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Your lovely comments are so much appreciated, and thank you for the fave, dear Laura. :)
Rolland Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:16 PM
very nice painting, i loved the expression "stopping hearts and feet" so suggestive thanks yann
Buehler Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:43 PM
Your appreciation is very nice! Deepest thanks, Yann. :)
Pandit Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:52 AM
I feel the delight you convey in progressive hues of dusk, noon, and eve. Splendid images in every haiku, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Thank you for the encouragement and great pleasure of your remarks, Vijay. Blessings
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:57 AM
Brilliant hues that bring joy and indeed stop our feet and hearts, Evelyn:)
Buehler Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Many thanks for your kind words, Jo. :)
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