Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

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I wrote this back in September 

Snow White

Oh darling you have become an angel sweetheart blossoming regal crowns
one flake unique floating into dreams so beautiful they sing only you

Pure petal wings flutter dressed in the color of snow purest kiss of beauty
They dance particles ice inside warm love melts shining into the purest thoughts

A faraway star winking in the night sky neon grasps breathless 
Confetti crystals falling sprinkles gently laying a carpet upon the ground 

Whom embraces the outer body sweetly enchants I open four chambers 
holding all keys out applauding flutters skipping echo pops each beat

My queen warmly holds hands with the soul grace of a thousand swans in flight
Once bitten twice shy one kiss from you smitten I would say smiling overjoyed 

I will always smile in loves amazing grace in soft gentle tenderness the joy it brings
Wishing that one was holding you right now footsteps in deep sand begins touching 

Wow mirror, mirror what a dream baby who blew one out off this world spinning 
you're so beautiful smiling these eyes dazzling mirror reflections blinding

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Arthur Vaso February 1, 2015 at 10:53 PM Very enchanting Liam! Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 11:29 PM so kind of you arthur dear pal heartfelt beautiful comment thank you deeply bless you pal

Kelly Deschler February 1, 2015 at 6:40 PM This is a lovely way of reviving the classic fairy tale. These tender words certainly bring her beauty back to life... Very nicely done, Liam! Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 7:12 PM ah your always so kind kelly thank you ever so much truly heartfelt beautiful comment bless you pal

Karl Mcdonnell February 1, 2015 at 6:30 PM Nice. Really liked it pal. Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 7:09 PM thank you karl for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Gary Bateman February 1, 2015 at 9:02 AM A Beautiful and most enchanting write Liam My Mate!! The Leprechaun Choir will be singing praises of joy about you most exquisite Couplet here. Very Well-Done Mate!! A "7" + FAV here!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. "Snow White" has always been one of my most favorite fairy tales!! -- GB) Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 10:59 AM sorry pal gary elfs to watch the gold not with it these days Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 10:57 AM you never know we might do a snow white dream with the leprechauns help he could inlist a few elfs to wath the gold lol wonderful comment dear pal thank you kindly deeply appreciated darry

Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2015 at 7:57 AM -No one can own each other - Thousand og poems have told us that we can not own each other - But we can borrow each other and forgets return :) - A beautiful and romantic poem, Liam - I wish you a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 10:53 AM now that's for sure anne lise beauty of love is sharing in my eyes wonderful comment dear pal you have a blessed beautiful sunday

Dorian Petersen Potter February 1, 2015 at 6:05 AM Hi Liam! A very beautiful love poem penned here by you my dearest friend. Awesome! Very dreamy, sweet and tender. I just love it! ! A huge solid 7 +++ from me ! Another very dazzling and romantic love poem penned by you to be held very close to ones heart. smiling. Your pen is truly golden! God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always!May all your hopes and dreams come true. Always believe in you! Praying He keeps you very strong thru all! Have a very lovely Sunday Liam! :) Love and hugs! xoxox D.^O^ Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM thank you ever so kindly dorian for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated