Notes About The Poem

For: Snow Fantasy or Christmas Nostalgia Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

December 2, 2025

Grave

Snow Softly Falls

I wonder if the snow loves the trees and fields, that it kisses them so gently? 
                    ~Lewis Carroll

The snow softly falls and I am alone
again and I cannot atone
for words I spoke in sullen haste
or for time’s sad begotten waste,
into cold winter I am thrown 

into a fantasy, I find my home
and weave a tapestry where you are known
to love me in this imagined place,
while the endless snow softly falls

bitterly around me as I taste
the foolish dreams I longed to chase
into the brutal cold are blown
as they lay me underneath eternal stone~
at last my nameless fears are faced
as the snow continues to softly fall.
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Alex Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 9:49 PM
"at last my nameless fears are faced as the snow continues to softly fall." - A beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Achara Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 6:35 PM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Snow Softly Falls" is a wonderful write. Great picture and quote... Have a blessed day with your win...........
Achara Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Thank you.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 7:04 AM
these lines spoke to me: to love me in this imagined place, while the endless snow softly falls I felt twinges of sadness delicately woven into your poem. Best wishes with this contest entry.
Achara Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 7:22 AM
Thank you.
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