Snow Season

The garden’s like a canvas, white as any page,
And snowflake ballerinas flutter cross a stage.

Jack Horne, written 7th October and, lol, posted too late for Gail’s A Season’s Dance contest: Winter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:50 PM
Jack What a sweet scene you have created. The visual description pulls the reader in. Thanks for the kind comment on my One Chance poem
Collins Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Jack -- I can't get that snowy day out of my mind. Will be here soon and I know good flaky dancers when I see them.
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:37 AM
oh ever so visual Jack..brilliant poetry
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 3:57 PM
this is what I call short but sweet!!
O'Leary Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Short and sweet... loved it, Jack!... Terry
Sivey Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 10:24 PM
I wonder what you would have written for autumn's season because the winter's dance is so very pretty, you are such a talented individual! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What an outstanding piece! Great Work!!
Adams Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 6:19 PM
love the image this gives...nicely penned!
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 2:56 PM
It would have been in the winners' list I am sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for all the visits ..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 2:42 PM
hi Jack very good couplet much enjoyed reading it Shadow x smile
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