Snow Needed

The days are lengthening, yet no snow
birds starting to nest, too soon I fear
winter still has yet to show her powers
buds forming on fruit trees need no frost
its icy fingers would kill them completely

All is too advanced, the bugs having a field day
gardener's will curse the abundant snails and slugs
that feast on their succulent sweet crops
we need several hard frosts to kill them off
a time of plenty too for rats and scavengers

who feast on carcasses of the unfortunate
much as I and others dislike the cold 
for the balance of nature we need the icy temperatures
to keep things as nature intends them to be
snow or a 4 day hard hoar frost then let spring come

Let spring burst forth in her warmth and splendour
chasing away the blues left by winters icy fingers
and the world leave the stark bare white far behind
as colour in all its hues and shades coats the land
bringing with it, both, new hope and renewed life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 11:09 PM
Shadow What a great creative write on Winter. A unique and interesting take on this season that a lot of people don't like. thank you for the wonderful comment on my Scary Moments poem.
Eve Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 2:24 AM
Wonderful perspective on a Season that is often unjustly slandered...
Hamilton Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 6:32 AM
ty Adam glad you enjoyed it hugs
Sivey Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:57 PM
This is a totally awesome write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 6:31 AM
ty Russell it has been an unseasonably warm winter here temps mainly 8C or higher I do not think winter is yet started which means a poor fruit and nut year I have a glorious walnut tree I planted 22 years ago I will miss its sweet succulent nuts if frost gets it as it buds. Our bane at the moment is floods national crisis here in somerset. ty dear for liking this hugs
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