John Freeman Poet Haiku

Snow Haiku

“snow flakes”

crystalline droplets… 
   heavenliest  ornaments
      earth blanket enhancive

seasonal special…
   holiday cheer enhancement 
      alpine purity

seasonal beauty…
   bountiful abundant store
      spring water release

For: **SN*O*W**  HAIKU
Sponsored by *SKAT*

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David Smalling December 9, 2010 at 4:20 AM Very musical ... remind of movies where the snow tinkles like bells.

Francine Roberts December 5, 2010 at 10:56 AM lovely set of haikus John , congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2010 at 9:25 AM Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara

De R December 3, 2010 at 3:06 AM Congrats on you win with this beautiful entry, John! Hugs, Emilia:)

Joy Wellington December 2, 2010 at 9:42 PM Thanks John! Blessings, Joy (Jew)

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2010 at 4:05 PM Good luck in the contest with this great descriptive work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Wilma Neels December 2, 2010 at 10:00 AM John, super congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest ;-)

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2010 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in Skat's contest, john

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 2, 2010 at 8:01 AM I like that spring water release, good set, like the eco thoughts, congrats on your win:)

Carrie Richards December 2, 2010 at 7:52 AM Lovely haikus....each one!! You have the world adorned with beauty of winter in each poem! Well done, John!

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2010 at 7:34 AM John) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

Tahera Mannan December 2, 2010 at 6:39 AM Many congratulations dear Moses for this awesome win.

Joy Wellington December 2, 2010 at 6:12 AM Congrats John, your pen has talked again. Luv, Joy (Jew)

Doris Culverhouse December 2, 2010 at 5:48 AM well written my friend, we are both getting close to a new birthday.... the time rolls right on around.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 4:02 AM Big congratulations on your win John in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 1, 2010 at 10:36 PM ah-- what a very inspiring set of haiku that celebrates the beauty of nature! congrats on your win, Moses :) -- nikko :)

Daniel Cwiak December 1, 2010 at 9:23 PM Great write, John. I like the way you have combined some of the words to give them a deeper meaning. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2010 at 8:49 PM Hey, VERY nice, john. Love that "alpine purity" Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Skat A December 1, 2010 at 8:44 PM John, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 1, 2010 at 8:38 PM Congrats Moses on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire November 30, 2010 at 10:36 AM I took you up on your blog limerick challenge, John. Great idea! Not an "offical" contest, but I hope we'll see some more limericks on the TSA! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta November 30, 2010 at 7:13 AM The last one is gem of haiku, John, conveying a great message with meaning, John, You have nicely deployed the apt images.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 29, 2010 at 8:03 PM Lovely words Moses created these entertaining Haikus with great message in every line my friend.. good luck in Irma's contest .. snow is expected here next week... oh ...

Carrie Richards November 29, 2010 at 5:59 PM such a unique and beautiful poem, John! Even holds the hope of spring!! Nicely done! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire November 29, 2010 at 12:31 PM Such beautiful images you share with us, dear friend. I really like thinking of snowflakes as heavenly "ornaments." Wishing you success in the snow contest, John! Love, Carolyn

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