Snow Flakes

snowflakes ride the wind looking for a place to rest hiding in plain sight

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Francine Roberts

Date: 12/5/2010 11:13:00 AM

beautiful haiku Larry, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 9:36:00 AM

Good one..Congratulations..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations Larry, on your worthy poem's recognition, and honor. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win inskat's contest. larry

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 8:47:00 AM

Love the last line, what a fun idea, enjoyed it. Congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:56:00 AM

Larry,) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 4:19:00 AM

Big congratulations on your win Larry in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2010 9:08:00 PM

Yes, that is so true, hiding in plain sight! Great approach , Larry. Congratulations. Also I loved that line, "ride the wind"

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2010 9:02:00 PM

Larry, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2010 8:55:00 PM

Congrats Larry on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv..

Amy Green

Date: 6/22/2010 2:59:00 AM

It's summer, why you trying to ruin it already? Just kidding. This was very nice.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/21/2010 9:36:00 PM

Awesome, Larry. Nice job. ...Ralph