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Snow Falls All Around

snow falls from above
kid looks up, searches for God
alluring nature

1.16.2022
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10th gradehaiku

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Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2022 at 8:05 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "snow falls all around" is a wonderful Haiku write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Merryman

January 18, 2022 at 1:09 PM

A lovely haiku, Rama! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman

January 18, 2022 at 11:32 AM

So lovely and profound Rama! It is important that the little kid in all of us "look up" in our search for God I can picture a little kid trying to catch snowflakes on their tongue. Sending you many blessings for the new year.