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Snow Eyes

The snow like diamonds Sparkling in the open field His eyes are brighter

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2009 10:53:00 PM

Very descriptive piece that is featured this week. Keep writing. Sara

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/22/2009 6:52:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/18/2009 10:09:00 AM

Hi Jen, I really like this one. Congratulations on having your insightful poem featured this week. Keep writing wonderful words! Lovingly, Dane

Date: 8/17/2009 6:17:00 PM

Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Karen

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/17/2009 12:01:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Jen. I hope his worth it :) Love, Iolanda

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/17/2009 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Veronica Joseph

Date: 8/17/2009 10:14:00 AM

Love it, congratulations - hope to see more of your work!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2009 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jen. Love Carol

Alli B.

Date: 8/16/2009 7:20:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured hun! This is a good one! -Alli

Date: 12/26/2008 1:52:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May you have a wonderful 2009! Keep on writing. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2008 9:17:00 PM

Jenny this is a great Haiku - Beautiful - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ