Snow Eyes

The snow like diamonds
Sparkling in the open field
His eyes are brighter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 10:53 PM
Very descriptive piece that is featured this week. Keep writing. Sara
Adeite Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 6:52 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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August 18, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Hi Jen, I really like this one. Congratulations on having your insightful poem featured this week. Keep writing wonderful words! Lovingly, Dane
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August 17, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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August 17, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Jen. I hope his worth it :) Love, Iolanda
Mckenzie Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
Joseph Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Love it, congratulations - hope to see more of your work!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jen. Love Carol
B. Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations on being featured hun! This is a good one! -Alli
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December 26, 2008 at 1:52 PM
Nice use of imagery. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May you have a wonderful 2009! Keep on writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 9:17 PM
Jenny this is a great Haiku - Beautiful - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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