Snow Dancing

Snow dancing
across misty morning mood,
winter laughs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shannon Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 4:38 AM
You've managed to make snow sound appealing!
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Love the way winter laughs while the snow is dancing. Hope old man winter has uttered his last laugh; I have friends who have been buried beneath piles of snow in New Hampshire for months. Love the poem, Darrell.
Higgins Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 3:11 PM
This is awesome...the entire Haiku works well.
Riley Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 1:39 PM
Got to love the Haiku, wonderful short image. Winter is still laughting as we wait for Spring. Thanks for sharring.Judy Riley
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March 21, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Nice use of personification and imagery in this concise poem. Creative use of allitereation. Enjoyed it. Karen
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