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Snow Covered Tableau

Scenes silver-painted Beam bits of sun shines Sparrows, snow tainted Hands of trees peace signs Bushes stand fainted All around God's shrines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/19/2023 7:59:00 AM
How gorgeous is this verse seriously, i am in awe of your word pairings, “ snow tainted” “ silver painted” those rhymes blew me away and the flow is stunning and is very evocative write that conveys so much in few words.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/19/2023 8:53:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/19/2023 7:05:00 AM
This is beautifully written! So nice :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/19/2023 8:53:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 8/19/2023 2:49:00 AM
Beautifully woven piece with gorgeous rhymes and elegant wordplay, loving the subtle alliteration here as well!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/19/2023 6:28:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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