Snow Covered Tableau

Scenes silver-painted
Beam bits of sun shines
Sparrows, snow tainted
Hands of trees peace signs
Bushes stand fainted
All around God's shrines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:59 AM
How gorgeous is this verse seriously, i am in awe of your word pairings, “ snow tainted” “ silver painted” those rhymes blew me away and the flow is stunning and is very evocative write that conveys so much in few words.
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:05 AM
This is beautifully written! So nice :)
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Sharma  Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:49 AM
Beautifully woven piece with gorgeous rhymes and elegant wordplay, loving the subtle alliteration here as well!
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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