Snow Birds

waving
to the
cardinals
jays and
juncos

waking
to terns
frigate
birds and
pelicans
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Ahhh! Love it. Love that seeing feeling too. xomo!
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February 17, 2020 at 5:30 PM
I wrote this with you in mind Maureen. But to see pelicans flying in formation and diving for fish is something I've missed. Melissa and I also went to the Museum if Modern Art and I took a photo of a piece that was titled "The Bird Muse". Obviously I thought of you. It was a woman's face and in front of her were all these hummingbirds. One day I'll send it to you Maureen. Thanks for believing!!!
Buehler Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 10:12 PM
Your poem seems to be filled with song, beauty and color, Jeff. I love the imagery in this lovely poem.
Connelly Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Evelyn. The beauty of reality.
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