Snow at Dawn

Slumbering, I dreamed that
sugar crystals drifted softly from pink sky 
till sunrise, when I awoke, and
sweetness greeted my eyes.
As if sifted by angels, 
it shimmered in winter’s dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Very beautiful. I loved the ending.
Gifford Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:11 PM
A beautiful piece, Andrea. Nothing beats early morning snowfall, magical. Enjoy your week.
Onclaud Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 1:09 PM
although this is a beauty , it cannot be the nearness of winter, andie, not yet...huggs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 11:55 AM
A lovely winter's write. I can see it... Have a fun day/weekend writing away...............
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October 5, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Not wanting to see those sugar crystal dropping yet. Love write Andrea. love phyl
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October 5, 2024 at 9:56 AM
I'm like a big kid when I see the first fall of snow. Hope your weekend is going well Andrea. Tom
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October 5, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Oh wow, those sugar crystals must be like angelic daffodils floating in the air! Sweet messengers of dreams! Love how this piece has created a mesmerizing tapestry of magic in such few words... love the wordplay and the imagery you've painted , just so beautiful and soul-touching! "As if sifted by angels, it shimmered in winter’s dawn" Adore that line... Wonderfully done, sweet Andrea. Best wishes & light to you always ~
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