Snow

Snuggled and hunkered down in winter clothes

Nestled warm in a winter wonderland

Only parts in sight are their eyes and nose

Wee ones out to play who can barely stand

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John Lawless

December 13, 2015 at 4:41 PM

Yup!! Just stand them in the snow...and watch them topple....Good one....

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 11, 2015 at 8:23 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest CayCay.

Skat A

December 10, 2015 at 12:53 PM

CayCay, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Eve Roper

December 9, 2015 at 10:36 PM

Great write, Cay Cay, congratulations on you top win!!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 9, 2015 at 10:26 PM

Yet another lovely write n top place win dear Caycay.. big congrats!

Kp Nunez

October 29, 2015 at 11:26 AM

Cute! This will surely appeal to Jan. Love the image and the fun way you wrote this. hugs!

CayCay Godwin

November 4, 2015 at 5:20 PM

And a hug and thank you to you, dear one ... CayCay

Anna Hopper

October 28, 2015 at 6:08 AM

Nice little image in my mind.

CayCay Godwin

November 4, 2015 at 5:19 PM

Thank you, Anna - CayCay

Michael Tor

October 27, 2015 at 1:31 PM

CayCay the imagery is wonderful.

CayCay Godwin

October 27, 2015 at 2:05 PM

I am so glad you liked it, Michael - Thank you, CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

October 27, 2015 at 8:28 AM

I remember being bundled in those old snow suits and being barely able to move.

CayCay Godwin

October 27, 2015 at 8:39 AM

Me, too. And how important wearing every single article was to my Mother. Bending and running just didn't happen! ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2015 at 6:16 AM

Oh, Caycay, I had assumed that I'd already seen yours. I've seen others on snow and I enjoy this one a lot too. yes, you used perfect rhyme and syllable count here! Did you ever see the movie "A Christmas Story?" This reminds me of that kid that was all hunkered down in his winter clothes and he would fall down in the snow and couldn't get back up! cute one!

CayCay Godwin

October 27, 2015 at 7:42 AM

Yes, I pictured my son, but now that you mention it, I do recall that scene! It was hysterical. The whole movie was funny - The Leg Lamp! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment ... CayCay

Mark Woods

October 27, 2015 at 4:13 AM

It can be such a fun time of year for the littlies. And don't they look so fantastic when they are all rugged up.

CayCay Godwin

October 27, 2015 at 4:28 AM

And have trouble walking! Yes, they are precious, but sometimes we take longer preparing them than they do staying out! I love the mental image of my little boy, bundled up in the snow. Maybe it is so clear because snow is rare in Texas. Good to see you ... CayCay