Snow

Snow
                                     chilly, an cold
                              windy, freezing, an white
                           shivering, bitter, an frost bites
                            gloves, long boots, an coats 
                                snowmen, snow fights
                                        it's winter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Evans Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Really like this. The rhythm, the pictures, the art.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Congrats Verlena on a wonderful win! Living in South Florida, I don't get the snow. Your poem gave me a little taste of it! Hugs, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Congrats on your winning work in the contest..I enjoyed reading it..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win Verlena
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Snow and winter go so very well together; I like your images, especially since in my country we never get any snow! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:48 AM
- A really wonderful diamond, Verlena !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 3:48 PM
dropping back with my congrats Verlena:-) Hugs Jan x
Gifford Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Hello Verlena, your poem portrays winter beautifully. Thanks for sharing,
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 2:36 AM
brr i feel cold reading this delightful winter write:-) hugs jan xx
Meade Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Nicely done -- the shape and the words fit together -- it even looks like a snowman or even a snowball -- I am getting out the hot chocolate now.
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