Ting Zhang Poet Rhyme

Snow

When I see the snow
It makes me glow
When I see snow fall to the floor
I want some more
It is so cold outside
But I still want to snowball fight
Oh no! My mittens are lost!
How much did they cost?
My parents will ground me!
Oh poor me! A week without my T.V
I must find my mittens!
Oh there they are,they are bitten by my kitten!
That was so close
I want to play more in the snow
Look through the window as it falls to the ground
There it goes drizzling down
I love the snow
It makes me glow

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Robin Davis September 30, 2013 at 5:30 PM This is very cute and creative. Lots of fun and imagery. Your words take the reader on a snow journey of fun and adventure, nice job

Skat A July 9, 2013 at 12:49 PM Ting, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2013 at 3:03 AM - Hi Ting, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)