Snow

predictions for a white Christmas
look hopeful with the first few snowflakes

festive feelings overflow as it lays
and heavy snowfall follows,
the ground covered in white

laughing like a child,
I run out to the garden
to build a snowman

slip and fall,
broken leg,
bored indoors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 11:34 AM
I hope that this is not true, at least, the part about the broken leg..It would be wonderful to play in the snow for awhile..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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March 4, 2011 at 12:56 PM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Jack. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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