SNOW

Now the night has gone
And the air is comin' cold 
How this melancholy falls
Like snow around my soul 
So cold. So cold. So cold. 

I still hear your name 
Like an echo in some hall 
It still burns this flame 
Like snow around my soul 
So cold. So cold. So cold.

   You used to say 
   In a world where mercy has died 
   You'd always stay 
   Here right by my side

Though my life goes on 
I'm frozen in my role 
In an avalanche at dawn 
This snow around my soul. 
So cold. So cold. So cold 



WATCH ME SING THIS IN CONCERT.
YOUTUBE: TYPE IN LOUIS SPENCE & DONNA OAKLEY. SNOW UPON MY SOUL. 

THANK YOU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ruebel Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Hello Louis, Sad but very well written. Like watching a story unfold. Thank you for sharing this As Always, Shar
Spence Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Many thanks for your time and kind comments. Louis
Nutter Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 3:48 AM
An excellent write, the metaphor was right on target, creating a vivid read.
Spence Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Anthony. Much appreciated. Louis
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