Snow

cotton hills rise up
to clasp the colorful sky ---
melt into failure 

freezing soon again
flickers into silver foils ---
fluorescent earth

27 December 2022
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December 27, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Two excellent haiku.. vivid imagery in both.. you are a talented poem..
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December 27, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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