Snow

Soft, swirling snowflakes.
Cover my head like a hat.
Oh so cold outside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem! Quite lovely and original!! ~ Carrie
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August 15, 2008 at 2:39 PM
Nice use of alliteration in this poem. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the haiku contest winners. Cute piece. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Degenhardt Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 12:03 PM
This is perfect in form and so very descriptive a read. Very well written. Michael
Spence Sr Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 3:52 PM
This is excellent. I can feel the flakes on my head also. I am shivering too. Great imagery! ~ Joseph
Winter Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 2:32 PM
Well that was lovely. Images of winter in July are simply delightful. Wonderful haiku! Love, Shar
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