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Snow

Soft, swirling snowflakes. Cover my head like a hat. Oh so cold outside.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem! Quite lovely and original!! ~ Carrie

Date: 8/15/2008 2:39:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration in this poem. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the haiku contest winners. Cute piece. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/17/2008 12:03:00 PM

This is perfect in form and so very descriptive a read. Very well written. Michael

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/15/2008 3:52:00 PM

This is excellent. I can feel the flakes on my head also. I am shivering too. Great imagery! ~ Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/15/2008 2:32:00 PM

Well that was lovely. Images of winter in July are simply delightful. Wonderful haiku! Love, Shar