Snoring

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I can’t answer that question~ I always fall asleep before my wife does

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2025 7:42:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. I always say if you can't beat 'em to snoring, divorce 'em. lol.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/14/2025 7:48:00 PM

Absolutely:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2025 10:37:00 AM

It is just that the one that’s awake notices. It seems such a curse, along with hot flashes…like a conspiracy to keep people apart or fighting. Two great poems about sleep!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/14/2025 12:16:00 PM

Thanks Kim. My wife and I both snore. She has heard me and I have heard her. I wear a CPAP now so less for me.