Snores

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snores reverberate from tenth floor hospital room.... river's fog rises

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2018 1:01:00 PM

i can picture this scene, ha ha

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2018 3:58:00 PM

Jack, I am sure the hospital staff were entertained with mine and Tommy's snores. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 1:50:00 PM

And I'm there, hearing the snores; watching the fog for those creatures from that Stephen King Movie, to come flying at me. Fog does create some interesting feelings in one. Well penned.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2018 4:17:00 PM

M.L., Your review encourages me to keep writing. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2018 11:26:00 AM

Like it!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2018 4:48:00 PM

Kim, Thanks for the visit. I am glad that you liked it. Sara

Christopher Goss

Date: 11/1/2018 11:16:00 AM

Interesting

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/3/2018 4:46:00 PM

Christopher, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara