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cars at mountain high
join a helicopter ride
take a scenic flight


March 25, 2015 1.05 a.m.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/7/2015 2:16:00 PM
Were you trying to keep yourself awake? These don't look like peaceful thoughts. In answer to your last question, I'm not Thai, I'm an Australian who is lucky enough to have an awesome Thai wife. But we do plan to retire to Thailand one day.
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/16/2015 10:15:00 AM
:)))))Thank you so much once again for another visit and your kind reply my dear poet friend and sir Scott. Hope to see you in Thailand someday if I'm still here. God bless you always!
Date: 4/26/2015 8:11:00 PM
Hello My sweetest friend... I thank you for the blog... Sending you hugs.. my BFF...Love you..LINDA
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Date: 4/29/2015 10:08:00 AM
Hi, my dearest fellow sweetest friend and sis! You are much welcome! It's always my pleasure to greet friends who are so close in my heart. Sending you hugs too my BFF. Love you too, forever.
Date: 4/11/2015 8:43:00 PM
It is you Leo, I miss very much, when will you be back here on the soup... Thank you for the kind visit to me poem. Hope to hear from you soon my forever poetry soup sis... Love ya Your BFF... LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:12:00 PM
I miss you so much as well my dearest sis! Hope you read my soupmail reply. Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by. I'm always so happy and so grateful to hear from you. I'll talk to you soon my dearest sis. I'm just stopping by for a while here coz my mom, brother and others will visit one of the places in Thailand. Sending you many hugs my forever poetry soup sis. I love you my dearest sis and BFF.
Date: 4/6/2015 4:54:00 PM
Hello My lovely poetry sis and BFF.... This is very much how I feel at the moment. Soon, I will take a scenic flight of wonders. Enjoyed the topic, makes the haiku interesting. Sending hugs and lots of love.... Forever your BFF...Linda
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Date: 4/11/2015 11:20:00 AM
Really my dearest sis? That's what you feel? :)))) Well, Thank you so much my beloved poetry sis for stopping by and your very lovely comments. It's my pleasure and honor to be visited by you. Sending hugs and lots of love to you too my forever poet sis and BFF. Hugs, hugs, muah!
Date: 4/3/2015 7:02:00 AM
it makes me smile.. :) hello dear friend..its nice to be back...miss you all!! Have a blessed holy week..hugs :)
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Date: 4/4/2015 11:09:00 AM
Likewise my very dear friend. Thank you, thank you so much. Biggest hugs!
Date: 3/26/2015 11:45:00 PM
Hey, Leonora. I guess I am dense. I don't know how the haiku relates to the pics. but i enjoyed seeing both. I sure wish I did not snore!!! Thanks for visiting me. It's always good to see you back here.
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:11:00 AM
:))) It's ok my dear friend, Andrea. I wrote this poem out of my desperation of joining a trip to Japan. :))) Besides, it was past midnight and was so sleepy when I wrote it. You're welcome and Thank you so much for stopping by. Big hugs!
Date: 3/26/2015 5:44:00 PM
Very witty, Leonora! You have a lovely sense of humour! Olive_eloi calls you 'amiga'; I'll call you 'amica' or 'habiba'; they all mean the same. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear amico/habibo Paul. Big hugs!
Date: 3/26/2015 3:39:00 AM
hahahaha I love your two lines my amiga Leonora.. :)! this is a clever funny write.. !love it! I wish that you are all well ad happy.. God bless you!hugs!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:16:00 AM
:)))))))Thank you my dear amiga Olive Elois. I'm happy now. My mom is here to celebrate with me my dad's death anniversary. God bless you too and so with your loved ones. Big hugs!
Date: 3/26/2015 1:11:00 AM
An amusing and beautiful Haiku dear friend. You sketched the wonders and beauty of Snoring people in a very effective way Galinta. Many of us do snores but the Music and Sounds created by some remains a thing to envy for many. More on your second Poem soon. Love and best wishes always….Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 3/27/2015 1:25:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravindra. Big hugs. I just came from jango.com looking for you there, my friend. Where are you? I've heard your singing voice at youtube before and I want to hear it again on the site you told me. thank you.
Date: 3/25/2015 8:40:00 PM
A perfect description and one that gave me a laugh...wonderful, Leonora! Hugs to you, Rhonda
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:33:00 PM
:)))) Thank you so much my very dear friend Rhonda. I'm glad my poem makes you happy. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and your precious time stoppping by. Biggest hugs!
Date: 3/25/2015 4:46:00 PM
hubby says I snore - i can't confirm or deny it lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:34:00 PM
Biggest hug back at you my very dear friend!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:26:00 PM
:))))My friends say I don't snore; but, how can I/they confirm if they snore louder? LOL. Thank you so much for taking your precious time reading my rushed short poem early in the morning my very dear friend, Jan.
Date: 3/25/2015 1:49:00 PM
- I must admit that I snore worse than a helicopter ....... but, I have guest rooms :) - Love it, dear friend Leonora - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your precious time reading and commenting on my poem my very dear friend, Anne Lise! Biggest hugs!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:17:00 PM
LOL. I can sleep tighter then. I'll imagine myself riding at the back of the King/Queen of the Forest while he/she tours me at the beautiful rain forest ....aweee!!!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2015 1:50:00 PM
- As a LION !!! :)))
Date: 3/25/2015 1:22:00 PM
Always nice to be able to sleep through it. I always suggest ear plugs...LOL.
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:20:00 PM
:)))Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by to read and comment on my poem my very dear friend! I appreciate it so much. Nice to meet you dear friend Janet! Biggest hugs!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:10:00 PM
:))) Thank you so much. But I can sleep without ear plugs especially on the third day:)))). Believe it or not, I am a dreamer and sometimes the sound also enters and transforms in my dreams.
Date: 3/25/2015 1:18:00 PM
This is a poem inspired by my comrades who always assigned me to stay in a room with friend/s who loudly snore when we’ve overnight outings, camps, etc :). They think, I can sleep well with a snoring roommate; but, they don’t know my secret…, lol. If my years of service qualified me to join a school trip to Japan yesterday, then I will be far more than willing & grateful with my usual assignment:)))
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:06:00 PM
Hello, my dear friend, Janet! Thank you so much. I'll join the trip next time. Nice to meet you.
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/25/2015 9:04:00 PM
:)))Hello my very dear friend, Anne Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2015 1:49:00 PM
:)))
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/25/2015 1:23:00 PM
Crossing my fingers for you! Good luck. ~Jan
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