Sniper Haiku

a world of bruised toes
tap-dancing in a mine field
will we ever learn?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 21, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Rob,..what a great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.
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May 9, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Very deep and meaningful haiku with great images, Rob
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