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Snatching Cherries

mounting a ladder -

   I snatch cherries from her plump tree

while grandmother naps



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Line Gauthier

June 3, 2018 at 9:40 PM

Lovely, nette. Congrats on your top win.

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2018 at 4:55 PM

so cute with the picture, sweetie. Congrats on a fantastic win.

Susan Gentry

June 2, 2018 at 9:28 PM

Congratulations on your win in the summer haiku contest!

Virginia Waters

June 2, 2018 at 5:02 PM

haha can see this one - good winner!

Tom Cunningham

June 2, 2018 at 12:36 PM

Lovely image Nette, congratulations. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 2, 2018 at 7:23 AM

- Congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

June 2, 2018 at 6:29 AM

Love this, Nette! Congrats!

Mick Talbot

June 2, 2018 at 6:22 AM

A super twist can just picture it, in fact in the day it would of been me taking that nap, congratulations on a superb haiku nettet! Mick

David William Breidenthal

May 28, 2018 at 4:52 AM

What a really great poem...I can relate somewhat (: simply written well -JWE

Paul Callus

May 20, 2018 at 3:40 PM

Making the most of a favourable situation, Nette! In hot summers siestas can be pleasant and restful:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 16, 2018 at 5:30 AM

- Lovely summer haiku, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ferdie Doyon

May 15, 2018 at 6:34 AM

Naughty way of sneaking out to pick cherries. Smart haiku and thank you for extending your congratulations!

James Peranteau

May 14, 2018 at 10:19 PM

I was elated to see the little princess in rapture with her conquest whilst granny was napping..... sneaky little one...*sm....this exquisite Haiku intensified the photostat dear poet, your readers I'm certain are smiling....have a great week Nette...much love, james