Snatch

. Ahhh picture I yesss the one you know and love late in the dark cold wet night SNATCH Ahhh yessss as mine throat gurggles and my dark dead green burly cloak consumes her sight Ahhh who would imagine her warm flesh locked to mine and her without fright Poor dear

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John Fleming

Date: 3/29/2015 9:51:00 AM

You certainly have penned a poem with great atmosphere...Excellent!! A "seven"! Best regards!! :) john.

James Peranteau
Date: 3/29/2015 12:02:00 PM

TY dear poet!

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/18/2015 5:41:00 PM

It's still Valentine's with Frightnight twist...macabre love...(?) With just a few words, you've spun a gruesome tale, deadpan...It was fun! Seven. Waiting in suspense for what more are up your sleeve. Smiles from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim

Daver Austin

Date: 2/18/2015 10:26:00 AM

Very dark - one might get a demented idea. The dark, dead, burly coat scares me. Reminds me of - here comes a candle to light you to bed, here comes a hatchet to chop off your head. Love, daver

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/16/2015 10:18:00 AM

Nice pen James! Don't know about this one, it sounds like creepy to me, a grave robber, body snatcher or something like that, anyway lots of great imagery and quite some suspenseful piece,my dear friend:) A 7 from me! I wish you a very wonderful day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2015 8:47:00 AM

I haven't heard the term snatch in many years. Sound like you are in for quite the ride!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2015 5:59:00 PM

hmmm, sounds like a vampire. Either that or a guy exposing himself in a very naughty way!!! Very entertaining read, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2015 4:46:00 PM

Well, not so sure about this one..I am wondering is this maybe Dracula or a zombie?..That is the popular theme these days..I am glad that I chose this one to read so that I have a question as to its interpertation..Sara

James Peranteau
Date: 2/14/2015 5:58:00 PM

Love your query Sara ! Can't you picture james....oh no...you almost snuck that one out of me dear poet ! ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 2:01:00 PM

I really enjoyed the vivid imagery James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/14/2015 12:41:00 PM

You managed to capture shock in this poem, creating the ambiance of the moment well. Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/14/2015 10:15:00 AM

james, you got me here.. a precious moment in time in wondrous words!.. awesome.. huggs